More Pattern

I'm going to try another color scheme again tomorrow, but is the peppered text working?

No Pattern

Great character introduction with the music. He kisses on the "bella"... great.

Revamp

working?

I'm not sure this is working, but at least there's one done to show.

Pardon the Language

Quite snappy editing that really makes this movie (In Bruges) look like it is going to rock or pale in comparison to the trailer.

Colors?

Do any of you have an opinion of the color?